I came into consciousness with the usual disorientation that comes when waking in a strange place. There was severe bruising on my left arm and a deep laceration that I couldn't even feel. This is the first thing I saw when I awakened. I turned my head and saw the IV in my other arm. I had no idea why or how I was there. Then I remembered: walking in the field, the darkness, the sudden spotlight in the sky. . .
I ripped the IV out and got up. Luckily, the door was unlocked. I left the room and walked down the hallway. It was similar to a hospital, but the equipment was slightly different in design and materials. Everything was angular, and the parts that looked like they should be made of metal were of a deep purple substance that glittered.
With a few quick maneuvers when I heard footsteps or voices approach, I remained unseen until I exited the hospital. I walked down the steps that were suspended in midair and found myself on a crowded street. The people there. . .they looked like people. . . but something about their coloring. . .it seemed off. Suddenly, a boy with red eyes, back hair, and green skin turned around to face me. Then he ate my nose.
What an unfortunate event. To wake up damaged and captured by aliens, and then to have their own nose eaten off. Let's hope this remains a nightmare. I think its cool that you replaced the metal with the "deep purple substance that glittered."
ReplyDeleteI like the use of the word "angular" to characterize the setting...and I love the possible typo in the line about his hair--adds a whole new (terrifying!) element to the boy! : )
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